Although i do like darker sounding stuff, even depressed in ways... this one is too depressed in my opinion. Best way i can explain it is that i like depressed songs, but if they are in your face at the same time. This is just i'm depressed look at me type of song... not, yeah this song is depressive... but not depressive with emotion.
Best i can remember off the bat right now is... this song:
This is a simple example bc it's the darker music before the chorus kicks in, but that is the gist of what i'm talking about. The darker parts are just okay and get you thinking, but when the chorus kicks in with her singing it's at god level. I like it when dark songs do that... you can feel the emotion.
Your song is just straight through dark... imo, that's boring when it's done all the way through. I want to feel the darkness.
Btw, thank you for sharing songs. I look at every song. Music is literally my religion... art in general is my religion, but music is a big part of that.