Sad Rap Song: by SupaDudz

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I'm always so preoccupied in all my thoughts

And I've thinking so hard that I'm always starstruck

But I've been slipping down the wrong path lately

But I've been trying to get back on the right track baby

My mind is more cluttered than a 9 year old room

And that chick that used to sit right behind me in class

She was moved away like a negative force

I tried to do anything so I can get her attention

Tried some new jeans and cop a new pair

While the teacher be talking I always be daydreaming

So my perfect little grades that my parents boast

Starting to get rough around the common core

And everyday I go home and I cry to myself

Because I think I'm going to be a disappointment all of my life

A mistake that was never supposed to happen

So I drown out all my problems in this mobile device

Cause that's only safe haven that I got in this life

Man my anxiety is getting harder these days

But I never get tested cause my parents say it's a fake disorder

So all my thoughts thrown away like a disposal

And all this beef going around in my group

Is more cooked the a filet mignonette

Whatever that French word is

Cause the truth is that is what my parents wanted me to take

But I didn't want to because I liked Spanish

All the mistakes keep adding up

Until my whole mind is blown up

And this is so insane

Life is basically a chess game

And I never beat the core of the king 

So why go for the king

It is a cruel game with no regrets

You seriously need to work on your flow and rhyme scheme, I literally rate this 0/10

Do you genuinely like mumble rap?

I genuinely don't think you know what the hell you are talking about. You obviously didn't rap it the right way because it is a mellow rap, not some hardcore Eminem hardcore emo shit you rap. It is supposed to give this sort of mumble ish vibe

Also no real rhyme scene. This is an off cuff verse