Fuck This Feeling- DUDZ

Author: Vader 5 years ago

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10.13.2019 07:18PM

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Hook (melodic)

She ripped out my heart, from my chest

Made me a hot fucking mess

All she has to do was confess

But she slept with my fucking homie

And now I'm feeling so lonely

Decaying so slowly

And I'm about to regress

Verse 1 (all verses melodic)

I did a lot of my time

Thinking about you all the time

But I did not crime

So why you gotta make me cry

I took 5 bottles to dry my eyes

Beers and tears they flood my eyes

Sobriety, that's fucking lame

Only here you fucking game

Hook (melodic)

She ripped out my heart, from my chest

Made me a hot fucking mess

All she has to do was confess

But she slept with my fucking homie

And now I'm feeling so lonely

Decaying so slowly

And I'm about to regress

Verse 2

Pain is inevitable, life is shit

Might as well say fuck it and whip 50

In a 25, about to die

Wish that wasn't a lie

Feeling crowd me like a dark cloud

Blowing clouds to strip to me down into bones

I'm on a fire, circus flare like a pipe

Gotta pick new feelings like ripe berries
Self loathing, self pitied, and self decrypting

Hook (melodic)

She ripped out my heart, from my chest

Made me a hot fucking mess

All she has to do was confess

But she slept with my fucking homie

And now I'm feeling so lonely

Decaying so slowly

And I'm about to regress

Verse 3

What did I do, what I do to deserve the pain

What do I do, what do I do, to numb the pain

I'm like a stale drywall, yeah I'm plain

But my life is just some game you play in

Civil War with emotions like I'm Thor

All for one and one for all, feeling die and my life is dry

Spread my wings and let my fly

Hook (melodic)

She ripped out my heart, from my chest

Made me a hot fucking mess

All she has to do was confess

But she slept with my fucking homie

And now I'm feeling so lonely

Decaying so slowly

And I'm about to regress

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@Vader

Sounds like a mix of Juice WRLD and X

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@AvoidDeath

Juice WRLD mostly but a bit of X

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10.13.2019 10:48PM

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@Vader

this sounds more like juice wrld, a lot like robbery (flows like it) and also juice wrld uses three line flows. Spaces signal lots of time between the words.

Hook

She ripped my heart out from inside me, made me a hot fucking mess

Now she's trying to frame me, it hurts less

But when she slept on my chest

It felt like heaven but on earth, but now it's a 'lot worse

Decaying slowly

So fucking lonely,

Boom, take the gun out, and then shoot me.

Verse

I tried to take her in but,

It felt like she was,

a fucking alc-oho-lic

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10.13.2019 11:19PM

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@AvoidDeath

the flow for chorus is this

She ripped out my heart, from-my chest

Made me a hot fucking mess

All she has to do was confess

But she slept with my fuck-ing ho-mie

And now I'm feeling so lonely

De caying so slow-ly

And I'm about to re-gress

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@AvoidDeath

Juice has a lot of drug references, which were an inspiration as well

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10.14.2019 05:10AM

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10.14.2019 05:10AM

You do realise this means it isn't your friend that she slept with, by default? It's your enemy, who you mistook for a friend.

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10.14.2019 03:30PM

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@RationalMadman

I know that...but that is not the primary focus

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10.14.2019 03:32PM

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@RationalMadman

For a melodic type song, you have to focus on feelings and how they hit hard. For the guy, you make a hard hitting disstrack with good rhyme flow and hard hitting disses

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10.14.2019 03:37PM

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@Vader

So is it a true story?

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10.14.2019 03:51PM

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@RationalMadman

Nope, just a writing piece

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@Vader

Oh. That does sound a lot like juice