Rap Battle. RM vs That1User
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After 7 votes and with 3 points ahead, the winner is...
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- Number of rounds
- 5
- Time for argument
- Two days
- Max argument characters
- 30,000
- Voting period
- One month
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- Multiple criterions
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Scribble with crayon in this chaos you shall surely fall
Even the Dunce's board word is better than yours
With strength born out of struggle,
Your in your apex so get ready to tumble
Even saw better writing back in Elementary
Think you’re all that but all you do is fall flat
On your face as you fail to give chase
True insanity has no room for rationality
Otherwise your mentality is just banality
Can’t go all out, mental drought
Your thoughts are blocked out
Because you’re boring, bland,
See you comparing yourself to Batman
Yet I see you in broad daylight seeking the illusion of power
Just like the rest of them everyday during every hour
Don’t you know power is merely perception?
And I perceive you as my reception
You receiving defeat, me receiving victory
Now you will see the lost soul’s season
But no don’t be fooled this is not treason
Swear no oaths, no loyalty
I overthrow royalty, an enemy of tyranny
So call me Legion cause there’s millions of me
Faceless, ageless, fearless, seamless
Watch as I spring up from a seed, a tree
Watch me as I am set free as you flee
Directionless as I attack you from all directions
The endless source of infinite trepidations
Think you’re the Joker,
Nothing but a jokester
Life, Domain, Kingdom, Phylum
Knife, Insane, Freedom, light ‘em
Take your Institution and light a match
Set it on fire, burn it down as I desire
Because simply you’re no match
Your reign has come to an end sire
I’m nothing but pure emotion, unending devotion
Devoted to your demise, don’t despise
As I unleash my pathological curse,
Afflicting you with my adverse verse
You see me as the androgynous nurse
Think you’re getting a healing? Surprise!
You’re Triton, I’m Poseidon, see me ridin’
On a dolphin, but for you it’s just Fin
Wasn't even close. Didn't do full points cause my opinion isn't worth that many points in this case.
Only judging this based on what lines I like since I am bad at rap in general.
I liked this:
"This is a goodbye present to your shook mind, get on yoru knees and worship the one who raps from high heaven,
Legend has it that you'd kill yourself in eleven milliseconds if it ever were evident that you get this skill as a blessing."
Found this funny for some reason
"This shit aint fair, you'd best quit, pretty your hair, eat Nesquik,"
I didn't like That1User's style because it felt to me forced but maybe that just might be me.
T1 has better insults, RMs felt a bit forced and stilted. I particularly liked T1 poop against the wall, with RMs, the insults seemed to mainly fall flat as he was trying to force the rhyme. The rhymes themselves were fairly simple on both sides, though I felt RM was more predictable - he also had a few more fizzles than T1 where the rhyme just didn’t hit home. Though both sides had their fair share
With flow - while RM went for a more complex flow, the rhyming simplicity and bad insults undermined it, and thus I felt it was easier to scan and pick up the pulse of T1.
As a result, I think T1 got this.
CVB.
For someone to say one side won sources, when they forgot to give a beat in half the rounds (the only thing I suspect could translate into sources on these?), is proof of bias completely overriding both reason and basic ethics.
RFD COMMENTS
No way of grading so I did a full sweep of votes
@RM - sure I suppose I could counter bomb it
RM did the same thing with me in my first rap battle. I gave no way to vote and he put 7. Since there was no way to vote for this one, I will give like RM did.
Why won't you vote on this rap battle? Just curious.
You might want to delete supadudz's vote.
These should really use the arguments only voting.
THE WINNER OF THIS BATTLE IS
THAT1USER...
Let me get it started here. RM's ego deflated himself and caused him to loose his preicous title. Overlooking an opponent and making the same mistake is the same trap I fell into with That1User, and he does that. Dropping the fattest choke of the year with a horrible, RiceGummed, weak, puny, rap, that is not the way to end a rap battle. It is so bad, that even bsh or Ram or anyone else could defeat that. And well, That1 just literally stole the crown
"Bullet to my head now I'm dead but only to be ascended to the Heavenly plain
Plane's descending down to Hell , get my gun, shoot, bang! ending your pain
Forever, final death, no more breathe, out of time to rhyme due to my crime
But no this is not cold blooded murdering this divine retribution you're receiving
For your sinning, best be believing I am currently redeeming, you're bleeding
Your death is my blessing no more confessing as the blooding is letting
Enduring the fires of Hell, waiting for Satan to come so I can start overthrowing
The old because I'm the new, ideas are bulletproof, revolutionary in my thinking"
This gave me a mouth orgy. The disses are perfectly executed here and the timing and the delivery puts you over the top. This is one of the best rap pieces I have seen in a while, and is up there on DART History
RFD 4
This time RM comes back with an interesting flow. It does work and I do find myself rapping to it, and it is overall a good line, but the disses highlight this rap.
"Fucking with me's like endless Jumanji, endless Jungle monsters chase you down serving this alpha Chimpanzee."
This is a great rap and overall great rhyme scheming and versing here. This as a final line to send the punch. Surely there is no way for That to come back. And he doesn't. That falls and chokes in this one
That1User 2-1
ROUND 4
That1User can overtake the King of Rap aka Rational with this rap. He can't blow it. And this one comes down to a coinflip on both sides. I honestly think that this is an equal round here and I must decide on a winner. I do think RM wins the roast by a slim margin and can take home round 4 with him with this round. i think his flow is BAD because he basically writes an RFD paragraph rap to boost his score, which I find very unquality, but I will give it to RM in this debate. I think his disses perform better and I don't want to vote down and cause RM to lose because of this, because he will cry and report me. So I will let him off with a warning
TIED 2-2
RFD 3
Round 2 was not close. RM's flow was so bad and That1User puts him into the ground here.
Oh Lord, I was gonna say I was bored
But then I read that shit like when the Dunce is forced to write an answer up on the board,
And everyone knows he's gonna get it wrong, knows he's gonna struggle,
Like they're wizards with the magic and this tragic cuck's a muggle,
"your name makes no sense man" rhymes with what? madman?
'Man' with 'man' and the syllable highlights a bad plan,
You can be both, think about it; hero or villain what's Batman?
Good or bad president; what's Obama? It's not contradiction just depiction of facts, can you fathom an Adam and Eve in one? Well that's your gender, Miss Catman,"
What is this flow RM? It goes down down down then up then a massive run on that you spew? This is not good at all
Compare that to That1User
No plan, no logic, no rhyme, no reason
Now you will see the lost soul’s season
But no don’t be fooled this is not treason
This is literally beautiful
and also
Can’t go all out, mental drought
Your thoughts are blocked out
Because you’re boring, bland,
See you comparing yourself to Batman
even more perfect...and he just drowns you with disses here going into the game.
that1user 2-0
RFD2
RM RAP
RM's rap itself is fairly good and flows good. I like the analogies that RM makes in the debate, due to the genius creativity by RM in this field. I think it is a strong piece by him, but I think there are parts that flow choppy and could be added. I will also mention, I do not like RM's rap style of aimless run ons and dragged on lines to find a rhyme scheme and a pattern that works
"Genderfluid, ageless being, are you adorned with divinity?
Are you a demigod here to beat over and over multiplied by infinity?
Na, you're a liar posing as unidentifiable, "
Really choppy flow and really cuts off my rapping with a 6 syllabul word vs a 3 sylabul word.
Then That1 comes in with one of the best flows I have ever seen. The whole rap just flows here and just blows me over by my feet. That1user is flowing really good and the disses are litteraly equal since RM has no dirt on him.
That1User 1-0
RFD 1
This is a very close rap battle for me to judge, so I will be looking at in depth two all of the users flow and rhymes here to determine who will win. I honestly think this a close debate and could come down to a few key things in the debate. I am here to critique so it's bread time
Thanks.
pls vote here if you got time.
Please can you counter-votebomb this?
Please ask for your vote to be removed. Do you think it's funny what you did here? This will enable a tie to be my loss if more votes come in.
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>Reported Vote: Alec // Mod action: Not Removed
>Points Awarded: 1 points to con for conduct
>Reason for Mod Action: This is a troll/non standard debate so votes aren't moderated..
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the deep enough line refers both to being shallow and 'high'
that you'd get*
makes them simply*
As evidence of profile as I see it:
https://i.imgur.com/8OItFnM.png
https://i.imgur.com/W4kGXxp.png
lack o' nerves**