RAP BATTLE 3 (FreeStyle)
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After 1 vote and with 3 points ahead, the winner is...
- Publication date
- Last updated date
- Type
- Standard
- Number of rounds
- 3
- Time for argument
- Three days
- Max argument characters
- 30,000
- Voting period
- One week
- Point system
- Multiple criterions
- Voting system
- Open
Rap Battle 3
Open Challenge, Open Voting Rules
Swears are allowed
No in tune beats
Judges should judge by rhymes, flow, and length
Grammar shouldn't count unless you can't read it
No plagiarism
Good luck
Rhyme scheme combined with flow and metaphorical harshness win every single round for Con.
Even internally, Pro frequently is blatantly not trying to have any rhyme scheme at all. How do bicycle and cycle rhyme? How to imminent (spelled as immanent by Pro) and 'peasant' really rhyme unless you pronounce one very strangely and fast/slow compared to the other. The thing is the entirety of Pro's rap is not at all good in rhyme scheme whereas con is phenomenal.
Con is a rhyme-scheme specialist so I am factoring in that it's sacrificing some things to get such good rhyme scheme consistency but seriously compared to Pro it's not a fair fight even. Combine it with puns and we see that there are literally zero times when Pro has a harsh pun or good metaphor THAT ALSO RHYME WELL. Con, on the other hand has the following:
R1
you ain't no psychopath bitch, you only kill my interest
your shit is worse than little poems my mom shares on pinterest
You tried to diss the pyramid, that shit came off weak
my pic represents enlightenment, eclipse at the peak
representing the light, obscured and occult to the sheep
I'm not a common square, but the black cube in the east
I hold all the knowledge and wisdom you ever seeked
I'm a clever beast
with a treasury full of severed meat
I never sleep
cause at night I hear letters weep
cause' buried their family members deep
in my raps, and once you hear them they forever creep
through your thoughts with tender feet
^ THIS ENTIRE RHYME SCHEME IS OFF THE CHARTS IGNORING THE BRILLIANCE OF THE PUNS and stringing-along of a chain of linked metaphors. 'tender' and 'weak' mean even the first and last line of that are linked in some metaphorical sense.
R2
I didn't like the n-word at all from Con and I happen to know he's, let's just say not of a racial complex entitled to use that... I can prove it too from on-site public links he's posted but that's not too relevant as I hate when black rappers say the word too. It was lazy and really isn't what Con needed to do to dig in harsh or flow well.
watch me crank it, watch me flow
I'm swankin' do you copy, bro?
your mom, she gave me sloppy blow
she cranked that knob, she got me so
turned on that I just shot three loads
and I think you should probly know
^ Pro never even had lines that internally rhymed like this. 'knob' 'shot' 'cranked' 'that'... 'swank'... There was a lot of blatant internal rhyming meaning one doesn't even have to try to flow that, it is naturally flowing well regardless of delivery quality (if this was a spoken rap that would matter and mean Con was even better in setting up the lines like this).
R3
You think you're a killer? then come find me
but you'd better find me first, cause' I already have your IP
you're a whiny
little limey
who fucks his dog in the heiny
you're a slimey
certified re-
-tard with weak rhyme schemes
^ I didn't like the lying threat but frankly this was such good flow and rhyme-scheme consistency that it was the highlight of the Round.
I just didn't feel Pro's rap at all and it objectively had poor rhyming.
Both rappers need to work on their grammar.
And anyway I read your rhymes, even if I start saying words really strangely to make support and comfort rhyme it's always one way it rhymes, you barely ever had more than two words in an entire line slighty resemble the syllables of the one above and you always were fixated on keeping rhymes two by two whereas type1 had the same rhyming sound the whole verse at times and still was sliding syllables in the middle. He cheats by repeating the same word at times but this was better than what you did.
I also didn't like how you kept repeating venom three times to make it seem like you were using creative lyrics you didn't just hear emin and go hmm let's insert venom but then it's even stranger as while venom can in a standard accent easily flow as a two syllable rhyme to denim venomous isn't said ven-im-uss and the word you rhymed it with was not ever going to flow properly in the rhyme schme or sound like an actually solid rhyme. There's more strange rhymes and flow choice you make but all your puns and metaphors don't dog at all like they're just rude and obnoxious but needing more actual bite to them I feel
Your not Eminem, your not even Machine Gun Kelly. The hell you are not even XXXTentacion or Lil Pump. Don't act like you know the answer to rap and can do anything
so what? i read the rhymes a different way you do? ur so funny voting me 5 seconds before the round ends because ur so funny. ur rfd is insufficient. if u were a GOOD rapper and claim to be a LYRICAL GENIUS, you can read rhymes and raps in any way.
I rap on here in an American accent where stuff I flow with and rhyme with doesn't at all necessarily fit my real accent. You also should note that many Americans would say it how I wrote it. Would you like me to show you other failed rhymes? That's a half rhyme but you had total non rhymes that flowed poorly.
Your judging should not be based off the way you pronounce stuff
Imminent. Imm-in-ehnt
Peasant. Peh-sunt
Maybe it's an accent thing, there are far more non Rhyming lines than that though.
Reported. The RFD isn't sufficent to why my flow is "inferior." All he does is kiss up to Type1 and doesn't need any feedback to the opponent or any else. Impiracally biased
Im-man-ent(i-ma-nehnt)
Peas-ent(pehs-ehnt)
ENT
(ehnt)
Fuck Kebabs
Wanna know a secret? I was lil' pump this whole time. That's right, it's lil pump in this bih.
He was referring to you as lil pump and being sarcastic in complimenting pump.
Yeah pump is like the bozongaloogie woo woo of rap bro. No one can fuck with his lyricism. He's got that masta flow up in this shizzwiggle namsain?
Never heard that ever
But your going down harder than Joe Weller
I actually think lil pump is a way better rapper than Eminem. He has the most lyrically incricatisms ever.
No lil pump is worse lol
I'm an entity of a higher frequency
I don't sleep or need
to even eat or breath
my features seem
to make the bravest creatures scream
because I look like like extraterrestrial star fleet marine
who will eat your spleen
plus the fluids that I bleed are green
I traveled to the milky way with a gift
I flew right past the earth and gave it to Sith
they stayed at a dis-
-stance cause' I came in equipped
with a lightsaber blade that's the length of a ship
the gift I gave em' was a quantum computer encased in a chip
and the waves it emits
could reprogram brains in an ins-stant
but what they didn't realize, is that they would submit
and becomes my slaves if they let
me convince em' to take it, and with
their help I would claim ownership
of your galaxy
I exist in all 11 dimensions of reality
and implode your cranium when I detonate your fallacies
so who's brave enough to test me?
I could be chained and cuffed, and next be
drained of luck
with my mouth duct taped and shut
and still I'll slay the fuckin' MC
who foolishly came against me
and now his cranium's empty
you drown in the depths
of my sound and my text
you can see me in the sky, catching clouds in a net
I'm bound to impress
but I don't count on finesse
I rap like a chimpanzee poundin' his chest
I compressed six books
on to the tip of a fish hook
and simultaneously read em' all with a quick look
if you mistook
me for a member of mankind
it's because I can grind
my body up and reform it from time to time
and my
ability to craft a grand rhyme
that can short circuit a quantum computer's RAM drive
every verse can cause a landslide
cause' when I rap I use doton-no-jutsu handsigns
plus my craniums a van's size
and my reversed waveforms scan whatever I'm scanned by
This is going to be like Lil Pump vs Eminem lol.
thats fine
I hope you don't mind if I take this challenge. Me, you and RM are the only rappers here so I doubt anyone else would take it anyway.